goten and trunks' unnatural friendship

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goten and trunks' unnatural friendship
Tweet Topic Started: May 21 2005, 07:38 PM (1,917 Views)
+ Byakko	May 21 2005, 07:38 PM Post #1
I once gave a Kangaroo a heart-attack just by staring at it Posts: 10,219 Group: Legend Member #158 Joined: February 7, 2005 Gender Male Favourite Anime Naruto Shippuuden What Browser do you use? Google Chrome Favourite Manga Fullmetal Alchemist	Rawr. Removed. ~Mike
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Gohan	May 21 2005, 08:06 PM Post #2
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+ Byakko	May 21 2005, 08:07 PM Post #3
I once gave a Kangaroo a heart-attack just by staring at it Posts: 10,219 Group: Legend Member #158 Joined: February 7, 2005 Gender Male Favourite Anime Naruto Shippuuden What Browser do you use? Google Chrome Favourite Manga Fullmetal Alchemist	tRawr. Removed. ~Mike
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Gohan	May 21 2005, 08:18 PM Post #4
Super Saiyan Posts: 1,951 Group: Member Member #222 Joined: February 28, 2005 Gender Male Country Canada Favourite Anime Sekirei, Dragonball Z, Sword Art Online, Attack on Titan, FMA, Soul Eater, HOTD, HS DxD, Stratos 4 What Browser do you use? Firefox Favourite Manga Sekirei, Dragonball Z, Sword Art Online, Attack on Titan, FMA, Soul Eater, HOTD	Good job 10/10



~~×Jason×~~	May 21 2005, 08:26 PM Post #5
Posts: 1,174 Group: Banned Member #247 Joined: March 9, 2005	I hate reading



+ Byakko	May 21 2005, 08:26 PM Post #6
I once gave a Kangaroo a heart-attack just by staring at it Posts: 10,219 Group: Legend Member #158 Joined: February 7, 2005 Gender Male Favourite Anime Naruto Shippuuden What Browser do you use? Google Chrome Favourite Manga Fullmetal Alchemist	thanks!bows
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* Kabonkers	May 27 2005, 04:36 PM Post #7
D-Wade jumps high, like kabonkers! Posts: 4,511 Group: Retired Staff Member #28 Joined: November 27, 2004	i really dont like the story. you wrote it well, but the story is just....i dont like it written: 9/10 (some gramticall errors) story line: 1/10



~~Blaze~~	May 27 2005, 10:06 PM Post #8
Saiyan Legend Posts: 4,247 Group: Banned Member #307 Joined: March 24, 2005	Great story 9/10. I just hated the end when Trunks says "Soul Mate" See, I'm a homophobic. I hate cough people. What does that mean in the end?



* Kabonkers	May 27 2005, 10:16 PM Post #9
D-Wade jumps high, like kabonkers! Posts: 4,511 Group: Retired Staff Member #28 Joined: November 27, 2004	me 2 blaze. i hate 'em as well.



+ Byakko	May 29 2005, 02:39 PM Post #10
I once gave a Kangaroo a heart-attack just by staring at it Posts: 10,219 Group: Legend Member #158 Joined: February 7, 2005 Gender Male Favourite Anime Naruto Shippuuden What Browser do you use? Google Chrome Favourite Manga Fullmetal Alchemist	Blaze May 27 2005, 04:06 PM Great story 9/10. I just hated the end when Trunks says "Soul Mate" See, I'm a homophobic. I hate cough people. What does that mean in the end? thanks for the rating but i dont understand what you mean. and mage i dont care if you're a homophobic or not but please dont spam i just hate it and it makes me wanna just swear at people and i dont wanna do that. thanks
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Cormac	May 29 2005, 07:14 PM Post #11
Posts: 4 Group: New Member Member #526 Joined: May 28, 2005	I never thought about Trunks and Goten that way.........is this something you'd have to watch GT to see? Great story though. Oh, and homophobes can get lost for all I care.



+ Byakko	May 29 2005, 08:16 PM Post #12
I once gave a Kangaroo a heart-attack just by staring at it Posts: 10,219 Group: Legend Member #158 Joined: February 7, 2005 Gender Male Favourite Anime Naruto Shippuuden What Browser do you use? Google Chrome Favourite Manga Fullmetal Alchemist	no i just thought what it'd be like if tey were "a match"
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~~Blaze~~	May 29 2005, 08:33 PM Post #13
Saiyan Legend Posts: 4,247 Group: Banned Member #307 Joined: March 24, 2005	Cormac May 29 2005, 02:14 PM Oh, and homophobes can get lost for all I care. Why do you hate homophobes? Are you cough yourself?



failedreality	May 29 2005, 08:49 PM Post #14
Posts: 28 Group: Member Member #519 Joined: May 26, 2005	6/10 I would have liked it more if you would have used more description like in a book. Just a few things about the character personalities didn't float my boat, but with fan fics you have to bend the character's personalities a bit. It’s great that you explored the sexualities of Trunks and Goten with out making them yaoi. I did have a problem on how you portrayed the homosexuals mainly ‘cause a lot of them don't act that way (or at least my friends that are queer and bi don't). The story kind of reminds me of something that happened with me and one of my friends... except it wasn't with kissing, instead it was with raising a child for one of our classes (she is bi by the way). I couldn't really hang around her for a while after that ‘cause I was just uncomfortable, but eventually we worked it out.
Posts: 28 Group: Member Member #519 Joined: May 26, 2005	Please remember to spay and neuter your pets for 17's sake ^^;;


PyrOxide	May 29 2005, 09:41 PM Post #15
Posts: 26 Group: Member Member #527 Joined: May 29, 2005	Awesome 10000000000000000000000/10 Good exellent outstanding Pat yourself on the back for that
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